Before I begin…

Before I go on to the next chapter, I need to excuse my mistakes on the intro to the last few chapters. I have shifted the verses to their rightful place, according to the actual lyrics. In the earlier conception of this story, I was going to cut one verse out of the song in order to seem less–repetitious. Mid way through the song, Hoyt repeats the first verse twice, almost as if he was trying to split the song into two repeating parts.

I had originally decided not to use the second repeat in the lineup of chapters, but upon review, I have decided to put it back into the story in order to lengthen it out to novella length. I hope it doesn’t take away from the story too much. I just wanted you, the reader, to know that the repeat is done on purpose.

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